Tune Up My Sales Email To Attract Clicks

Estado: Closed
Premio: $13
Propuestas recibidas: 2
Ganador: vincentt8

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have been running a mailchimp campaign with email body in the attached file.

have had zero clicks on the links.

the winner fo this contest will edit and change the attached so that it will convert to clicks!

second attachment highlit in red circle the focus of the mail ... follow this

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Faithzeal
- 4 años atrás
"Please forgive THE INTRUSION … No one DISLIKES UNNECESSARY EMAIL more than I....." This statement attached at the end of your email is a big NO NO NO. Never use negative words in a copy. What if there weren't even thinking of intrusion or dislikes....you suggested those. Use compelling and engaging words only. There are better and more creative ways to suggest unsubscribing from your email lists. If you need my help, you may want to consider increasing the prize to match the quality of what you expect then get the project #sealed
- 4 años atrás
Faithzeal
- 4 años atrás
Dear employer, the reason you had zero clicks or subscription is simple. Your email letter was very much unclear. I read the email like your client would and could not understand a single thing. Clarity and conciseness is very important in email marketing. The email could not the question, "how can this benefit me?" it also did not appeal to the emotions of your target clients. I will help you write something that will compel and arouse the curiosity of your targets but first, I would need you to give me a few information 1) what you project is about 2) who are your target audience) what action do you want them to take? buy a product/ service OR sign-up/visit a website. Next, I'll need you to #increaseprize this is a copy writing job and it needs to be done professionally. The prize you put up is nowhere near it AT ALL. You also need to #guaranteed the project so I can be sure I am putting in genuine efforts for a work that will be paid for.
- 4 años atrás
emense
- 4 años atrás
#guaranteed to get the best.
- 4 años atrás
bishalali101
- 4 años atrás
Hello there!
I have carefully gone through your job post and understood your requirements. I am offering you my quality service. You can check my profile & portfolio for details about my experiences. If you give me the opportunity, I’ll provide you quality service according to your instructions within your expected budget & estimated time. We can discuss it more over chat and also can show you my plans as well as previous work samples.I am waiting for your positive response. Thanks! Best Regards, Monirul Islam
- 4 años atrás
aman46897
- 4 años atrás
#guaranteed
- 4 años atrás