I am a very spiritual person, so I am very interested in your screen play and the message it tries to show. Just to show an idea of what I would like to do: maybe it would be interesting to spark some conflict between the characters. The priest having a spiritual crisis by not understanding why God chose to save an "immoral" person and take a person who has devoted her life to God. The screen play would develop into a discussion between the different characters of the ontological conceptions of God, only to discover that the drug addict does not believe in God (in the Christian way), which only solidifies the crisis of the priest. I think it could be a very interesting idea. Let me know what you think, I'm looking forward of working with you