Write a short suspense story set at the end of WW2

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  KJudeFdo

  • 3 años atrás

  Ahh, I see... Thank you for the feedback! If you want me to rewrite it, I'll be willing to give it a shot, shorten the story, try to smooth things out, and maybe delete some unnecessary elements... Anyway, I hope you find what you're looking for!

  • 3 años atrás
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  Organizador del concurso

  • 3 años atrás

  It's an interesting idea, but is a little bored and too long.
  The best part is when he fall to the ground and returns to "reality".
  Also, the end is tragic and comic, and I like it.
  Also, I think it's a little psychological, and that's a good point.
  But it's insufficient.
  Thanks anyway.

  • 3 años atrás